高分作文秘诀
高分作文秘诀之一：使用正确的时态。例如： 1. A big fire destroyed the forest which belonged to the villagers.
1. A big fire destroyed the forest belonging to the villagers. 2. The village has changed greatly since he left his hometown. 3. Nancy promised to come tonight. 4 So I am writing to apply for the job.
高分作文秘诀之二：使用正确的时态。例如： 1.This room measures 30 feet long and 25 feet wide. 2. The apartment consists of two rooms and a kitchen. 3. This city has rapidly developed into an industrial center. 4. A big fire broke out in the factory last night.
高分作文秘诀之三：使用一般现在时时，不要忘记单数第三人称动词要加s 。例如： 1. Her father forbids her to watch TV because he is afraid that it will affect her studies. 2. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops your interests.
高分作文秘诀之四：正确使用形容词和副词。例如： 1. He likes playing computer games very much.
2. You can’t imagine how wonderfully she sings. 3. The roads became slippery because of the rain in the morning. 4. The tea tastes a bit strangely.
高分作文秘诀之五：避免使用汉语式英语。例如：
1. 60% of the students think an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.
1. There are 60% of the students who think an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.
1. There are 60% of the students thinking an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.
2. He has few friends. 3. Recently great changes have taken place in our village. 4. You are welcome to visit our school. 5. Today I visited the Smiths--- my first visit to an American family.
高分作文秘诀之六：避免出现句子的结构性错误。例如： 1. Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing.
1. There are twenty students in our class who have been to Beijing. 2. Many of the students are against the plan. 3. Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.
高分作文秘诀之七：使用较高级词汇。例如：
1. My English is getting better and better.
1. My English is improving.
2. We are seeing more and more cars on the roads.
2. We are seeing an increasing number of cars on the roads.
3. The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
3. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
高分作文秘诀之八：使用较复杂句式。例如：
1. She is a girl, she is 15 years old.
1. She is a girl aged 15.
2. Last winter holiday I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandma.
2. My father and I spent our last winter holiday in the countryside, visiting my grandma.
3. We hadn’t been there for many years and were greatly surprised at the changes.
3. As we hadn’t been there for many years, we were greatly surprised at the changes.
3. Not having been there for many years, we were greatly surprised at the changes.
4. I passed my driving test. This surprised my father.
4. I passed my driving test, which surprised my father.
体会下列句子的句式结构：
1. We should try to make proper use of the computer, making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.
2. Being absorbed in the game, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves, leaving their homework undone.
3. Some students have their health damaged by burying themselves in the Internet.
高分作文秘诀之九：使用恰当的过渡语。例如：
1. 表示转折关系的过度语：but, however, nevertheless on the contrary, on the other hand
2. 表示递进关系的过度语：in addition, besides, moreover, furthermore, what’s more, What ’s worse, to make matters worse, the most important of all, worst of all, especially, in particular, on top of all,
3. 表示结果关系的过度语：therefore, thus, consequently, as a result, that’s why…
4. 表示顺序关系的过度语：firstly, secondly, thirdly, meanwhile lastly/finally/eventually, last but not the least, to begin with, after that,
5. 表示总结的过度语：in conclusion, in brief, in short, in a word, on the whole, to sum up
6. 表示个人观点的过度语：in my opinion, as far as I’m concerned, personally, as for me, to be frank
7. 表示他人观点的过度语：It is widely accepted that…; A commonly held idea is that…; It is taken for granted that…
高分作文秘诀之十：避免重复使用同一单词或短语。例如：
1. There are many people who speak so after learning you can communicate with them easily.
1. There are many people who speak so after learning you can communicate with them easily.
2. 2. 3. next year.
3. 4. 4.
高分作文秘诀之十一：句子结构要多样化。例如：
1. There is a teaching building on the left side of the school. There is a library on the right. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. There is a new playground in front of the school.
1. Entering the school, you ’ll find a teaching building on it ’s left side. There is a library standing on the right, in which books, newspapers and magazines are stored. In front of the school lies a new playground.
2. I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
2. Your letter of August 15th reached me this morning.
3. We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
3. How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.
高分作文秘诀之十二：使用正确的标点符号。例如：
1. I believe with my hard work my dream to become a biologist will come true.
1. I believe, with my hard work, my dream to become a biologist will come true.
2. Although I am good at maths. I like English very much.
2. Although I am good at maths, I like English very much.
3. He is a good-looking tall muscular man.
3. He is a good-looking, tall, muscular man.
高分作文秘诀之十三：写出引人入胜的开头。例如：
1. 使用能激起读者好奇心的句子。例如：
When she got up that morning, she would never have thought she’d be spending the night in prison
2. 使用一些逸闻趣事。例如：
My father used to dress up as Santa Claus every Christmas. For years we had to pretend we didn’t know it was him!
3. 使用一些令人惊讶﹑印象深刻或震惊的事实或数据。例如：
Half of all marriages in the UK end in divorce.
4. 使用疑问句。例如：
Have you ever had the feeling that someone was following you?
高分作文秘诀之十四：尽量少使用直接引语，而多使用间接引语。例如：
1. I believe that reading books is a waste of time because my Uncle Tom says so. He always tells me, “Reading books is a waste of time.”
1. My Uncle Tom often tells me that reading books is a waste of time. I believe that there is some truth in this.
2. A person said to me, “Don ’t forget to bring enough food and water.”
2. I was reminded to bring enough food and water.
高分作文秘诀之十五：使用短语作状语时，要避免逻辑关系混乱。例如： 1. When I was ten, my grandfather died of cancer. 2. Since he is a middle school student, his parents are strict with him. 3. To swim properly, one needs a course of instruction. 4. When we walked through the park, an old tower came into sight. 5. Falling off the bicycle, I had my leg badly hurt. 6. Going through a red light, he was stopped by the traffic police on duty.
高分作文秘诀
高分作文秘诀之一：使用正确的时态。例如： 1. A big fire destroyed the forest which belonged to the villagers.
1. A big fire destroyed the forest belonging to the villagers. 2. The village has changed greatly since he left his hometown. 3. Nancy promised to come tonight. 4 So I am writing to apply for the job.
高分作文秘诀之二：使用正确的时态。例如： 1.This room measures 30 feet long and 25 feet wide. 2. The apartment consists of two rooms and a kitchen. 3. This city has rapidly developed into an industrial center. 4. A big fire broke out in the factory last night.
高分作文秘诀之三：使用一般现在时时，不要忘记单数第三人称动词要加s 。例如： 1. Her father forbids her to watch TV because he is afraid that it will affect her studies. 2. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops your interests.
高分作文秘诀之四：正确使用形容词和副词。例如： 1. He likes playing computer games very much.
2. You can’t imagine how wonderfully she sings. 3. The roads became slippery because of the rain in the morning. 4. The tea tastes a bit strangely.
高分作文秘诀之五：避免使用汉语式英语。例如：
1. 60% of the students think an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.
1. There are 60% of the students who think an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.
1. There are 60% of the students thinking an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.
2. He has few friends. 3. Recently great changes have taken place in our village. 4. You are welcome to visit our school. 5. Today I visited the Smiths--- my first visit to an American family.
高分作文秘诀之六：避免出现句子的结构性错误。例如： 1. Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing.
1. There are twenty students in our class who have been to Beijing. 2. Many of the students are against the plan. 3. Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.
高分作文秘诀之七：使用较高级词汇。例如：
1. My English is getting better and better.
1. My English is improving.
2. We are seeing more and more cars on the roads.
2. We are seeing an increasing number of cars on the roads.
3. The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
3. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
高分作文秘诀之八：使用较复杂句式。例如：
1. She is a girl, she is 15 years old.
1. She is a girl aged 15.
2. Last winter holiday I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandma.
2. My father and I spent our last winter holiday in the countryside, visiting my grandma.
3. We hadn’t been there for many years and were greatly surprised at the changes.
3. As we hadn’t been there for many years, we were greatly surprised at the changes.
3. Not having been there for many years, we were greatly surprised at the changes.
4. I passed my driving test. This surprised my father.
4. I passed my driving test, which surprised my father.
体会下列句子的句式结构：
1. We should try to make proper use of the computer, making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.
2. Being absorbed in the game, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves, leaving their homework undone.
3. Some students have their health damaged by burying themselves in the Internet.
高分作文秘诀之九：使用恰当的过渡语。例如：
1. 表示转折关系的过度语：but, however, nevertheless on the contrary, on the other hand
2. 表示递进关系的过度语：in addition, besides, moreover, furthermore, what’s more, What ’s worse, to make matters worse, the most important of all, worst of all, especially, in particular, on top of all,
3. 表示结果关系的过度语：therefore, thus, consequently, as a result, that’s why…
4. 表示顺序关系的过度语：firstly, secondly, thirdly, meanwhile lastly/finally/eventually, last but not the least, to begin with, after that,
5. 表示总结的过度语：in conclusion, in brief, in short, in a word, on the whole, to sum up
6. 表示个人观点的过度语：in my opinion, as far as I’m concerned, personally, as for me, to be frank
7. 表示他人观点的过度语：It is widely accepted that…; A commonly held idea is that…; It is taken for granted that…
高分作文秘诀之十：避免重复使用同一单词或短语。例如：
1. There are many people who speak so after learning you can communicate with them easily.
1. There are many people who speak so after learning you can communicate with them easily.
2. 2. 3. next year.
3. 4. 4.
高分作文秘诀之十一：句子结构要多样化。例如：
1. There is a teaching building on the left side of the school. There is a library on the right. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. There is a new playground in front of the school.
1. Entering the school, you ’ll find a teaching building on it ’s left side. There is a library standing on the right, in which books, newspapers and magazines are stored. In front of the school lies a new playground.
2. I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
2. Your letter of August 15th reached me this morning.
3. We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
3. How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.
高分作文秘诀之十二：使用正确的标点符号。例如：
1. I believe with my hard work my dream to become a biologist will come true.
1. I believe, with my hard work, my dream to become a biologist will come true.
2. Although I am good at maths. I like English very much.
2. Although I am good at maths, I like English very much.
3. He is a good-looking tall muscular man.
3. He is a good-looking, tall, muscular man.
高分作文秘诀之十三：写出引人入胜的开头。例如：
1. 使用能激起读者好奇心的句子。例如：
When she got up that morning, she would never have thought she’d be spending the night in prison
2. 使用一些逸闻趣事。例如：
My father used to dress up as Santa Claus every Christmas. For years we had to pretend we didn’t know it was him!
3. 使用一些令人惊讶﹑印象深刻或震惊的事实或数据。例如：
Half of all marriages in the UK end in divorce.
4. 使用疑问句。例如：
Have you ever had the feeling that someone was following you?
高分作文秘诀之十四：尽量少使用直接引语，而多使用间接引语。例如：
1. I believe that reading books is a waste of time because my Uncle Tom says so. He always tells me, “Reading books is a waste of time.”
1. My Uncle Tom often tells me that reading books is a waste of time. I believe that there is some truth in this.
2. A person said to me, “Don ’t forget to bring enough food and water.”
2. I was reminded to bring enough food and water.
高分作文秘诀之十五：使用短语作状语时，要避免逻辑关系混乱。例如： 1. When I was ten, my grandfather died of cancer. 2. Since he is a middle school student, his parents are strict with him. 3. To swim properly, one needs a course of instruction. 4. When we walked through the park, an old tower came into sight. 5. Falling off the bicycle, I had my leg badly hurt. 6. Going through a red light, he was stopped by the traffic police on duty.