1 二.漫画类 先描述图画 再发表自己看法
范文:简要描述图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。
(一) 内容要点:
1. 描述文字说明:
1) 学生被迫上很多补习班
2) 无兴趣可言
2. 议论文字说明:
1) 太多的补习班是浪费时间
2) 学习要有兴趣
3) 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习
4) 表达希望
(二)One possible version:
Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don ’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!
(三)文章结构和套语:
Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to … besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is …
In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely …
1). 开头:
Look at this picture.
The picture shows that…
From this picture, we can see…
2).衔接句:
1. As we all know, …
2. As is well-known, …
3. It is well known that…
4. In my opinion, …
5. As far as I am concerned, …
6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
2
3).衔接词
1.表示时间顺序:first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。
2.表示递进关系:and, also, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, above all, what’s more, what ’s better, in the same way等。
3. 表示方位:near (to), far (from), in (the) front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the
right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside等。
4. 表示因果关系:as, since, for, so, because, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result,
because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore等。
5.表示目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to/ that, for the sake of等。
6.表示列举和顺序关系:first, second, third, next, then, finally, lastly, after that, first of all, to begin with, for one thing......, for another......等。
7.表示解释和说明:for example, for instance, that is, namely, that is to say, such as, in other words, and so on等。
8.表示转折和对比关系:but, yet, sill, anyway, while, however, (al)though, on the contrary, only, on the other hand, for all that, in contrast, similarly, at the same time, just like, just as等。
9.表示概括和总结:altogether, therefore, in conclusion, in brief, on the whole, in short, in a word, generally speaking, generally, as has been stated等。
练习1.
根据图画内容,以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点,不得逐条翻译。
1. 简单描述漫画的内容;
2. 作业负担过重;
3. 精讲精练;
4. 参加体育锻炼和社会活动。
We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure ”
As is well-known, we Chinese students which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.
3 us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.
练习2.
Directions : write an English composition in over 120 words bases on the picture and the instructions given below.
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
He tells her that unless she puts her heart into learning, she can’t ride She warns her that if she doesn’t be careful, she will get off the
hurt. The girl’s grandmother
练习3.
The Tutor Mother Invited
can ’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim
following the tutor. We can imagine the final result. and daughters to when they grow up. However,
练习4.
请根据下面的漫画, 以“What Will the Child Become?”为标题,写一篇短文。
要求:1 词数100左右,不包括已给出的开头部分;
2 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法。
参考词汇:电子琴—— electronic piano
What Will the Child Become?
Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five.
Who is the “King” of the family? The only child! He is
holding an umbrella over
4 What is his grandmother doing behind? She is But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more than anyone else. He’ll become no good for the world.
练习5.
下面这幅画描述了一个情景。请根据中文提示以“They’re Thinking Along the Same Line”为题写一篇短文。注意:1 短文须忠实描述图画内容,可发挥想象适当增加细节也可进行简单评述,但短文必须连贯。2 词数100字左右。
They’re Thinking Along the Same Line Neither of them wants to give way to the other. Great minds think alike. Today their minds happen to run along the same line: “Anyway he wouldn’t dare to run into me.” In no time they’ll crash into each other, fall to the ground and roll together into the same ditch. Hopefully, from this incident, they will draw the same
练习6.
目前中国学生的负担越来越重,减负的呼声日益高涨,但减负的结果如何呢?请根据下面两幅图,以“The Change of Load”为题用英语写一篇短文。
The Change of Load
At present, many students can’t afford the heavy tuition, for which many of them will
5
假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者;以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻, 谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要求:
1. 描述漫画内容; 2.发表个人感想。
注意:
1. 短文标题与开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯
3. 词数120左右;
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:告示牌sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.
【参考范文】
参考范文 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge
dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
6 请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于 50.
【参考范文】1
【参考范文】2
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1 二.漫画类 先描述图画 再发表自己看法
范文:简要描述图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。
(一) 内容要点:
1. 描述文字说明:
1) 学生被迫上很多补习班
2) 无兴趣可言
2. 议论文字说明:
1) 太多的补习班是浪费时间
2) 学习要有兴趣
3) 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习
4) 表达希望
(二)One possible version:
Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don ’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!
(三)文章结构和套语:
Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to … besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is …
In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely …
1). 开头:
Look at this picture.
The picture shows that…
From this picture, we can see…
2).衔接句:
1. As we all know, …
2. As is well-known, …
3. It is well known that…
4. In my opinion, …
5. As far as I am concerned, …
6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
2
3).衔接词
1.表示时间顺序:first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。
2.表示递进关系:and, also, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, above all, what’s more, what ’s better, in the same way等。
3. 表示方位:near (to), far (from), in (the) front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the
right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside等。
4. 表示因果关系:as, since, for, so, because, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result,
because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore等。
5.表示目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to/ that, for the sake of等。
6.表示列举和顺序关系:first, second, third, next, then, finally, lastly, after that, first of all, to begin with, for one thing......, for another......等。
7.表示解释和说明:for example, for instance, that is, namely, that is to say, such as, in other words, and so on等。
8.表示转折和对比关系:but, yet, sill, anyway, while, however, (al)though, on the contrary, only, on the other hand, for all that, in contrast, similarly, at the same time, just like, just as等。
9.表示概括和总结:altogether, therefore, in conclusion, in brief, on the whole, in short, in a word, generally speaking, generally, as has been stated等。
练习1.
根据图画内容,以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点,不得逐条翻译。
1. 简单描述漫画的内容;
2. 作业负担过重;
3. 精讲精练;
4. 参加体育锻炼和社会活动。
We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure ”
As is well-known, we Chinese students which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.
3 us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.
练习2.
Directions : write an English composition in over 120 words bases on the picture and the instructions given below.
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
He tells her that unless she puts her heart into learning, she can’t ride She warns her that if she doesn’t be careful, she will get off the
hurt. The girl’s grandmother
练习3.
The Tutor Mother Invited
can ’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim
following the tutor. We can imagine the final result. and daughters to when they grow up. However,
练习4.
请根据下面的漫画, 以“What Will the Child Become?”为标题,写一篇短文。
要求:1 词数100左右,不包括已给出的开头部分;
2 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法。
参考词汇:电子琴—— electronic piano
What Will the Child Become?
Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five.
Who is the “King” of the family? The only child! He is
holding an umbrella over
4 What is his grandmother doing behind? She is But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more than anyone else. He’ll become no good for the world.
练习5.
下面这幅画描述了一个情景。请根据中文提示以“They’re Thinking Along the Same Line”为题写一篇短文。注意:1 短文须忠实描述图画内容,可发挥想象适当增加细节也可进行简单评述,但短文必须连贯。2 词数100字左右。
They’re Thinking Along the Same Line Neither of them wants to give way to the other. Great minds think alike. Today their minds happen to run along the same line: “Anyway he wouldn’t dare to run into me.” In no time they’ll crash into each other, fall to the ground and roll together into the same ditch. Hopefully, from this incident, they will draw the same
练习6.
目前中国学生的负担越来越重,减负的呼声日益高涨,但减负的结果如何呢?请根据下面两幅图,以“The Change of Load”为题用英语写一篇短文。
The Change of Load
At present, many students can’t afford the heavy tuition, for which many of them will
5
假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者;以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻, 谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要求:
1. 描述漫画内容; 2.发表个人感想。
注意:
1. 短文标题与开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯
3. 词数120左右;
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:告示牌sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.
【参考范文】
参考范文 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge
dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
6 请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于 50.
【参考范文】1
【参考范文】2
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