书面表达(满分25分)
请根据下面的漫画内容,结合生活实际,
用英语写一篇短文描述漫画内容,分析这种社
会现象产生的原因,并发表感想。
注意:
1. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 参考词汇:义务劳动voluntary labour; 观念outlook
精神文明:spiritual civilization
物质文明:material civilization
We can see in the picture that
写作:(25分)
书面表达评分建议:
一、评分原则:
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于100和多于130的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
One possible version: “Aren’t you kidding me? Times have changed and doing voluntary labor is already out of date.”
It is true that with the development of economy, many people have become rich. However, with their wallets full, some people have changed their outlook on value, laying too much emphasis on nothing but money and personal interests. At one time, serving the people heart and soul was glorious, but now it is being constantly laughed at.
In my opinion, spiritual civilization is as important as material civilization. Nowadays, the government advocates setting up a harmonious society. If everyone does a little bit for others and the society, our world will be a much better on
改错:
I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This seems popular among students. Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies. Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.
So every coin has two sides. Our school work is already a heavy burden. Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.. We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.
书面表达(满分25分)
请根据下面的漫画内容,结合生活实际,
用英语写一篇短文描述漫画内容,分析这种社
会现象产生的原因,并发表感想。
注意:
1. 文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 参考词汇:义务劳动voluntary labour; 观念outlook
精神文明:spiritual civilization
物质文明:material civilization
We can see in the picture that
写作:(25分)
书面表达评分建议:
一、评分原则:
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于100和多于130的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
One possible version: “Aren’t you kidding me? Times have changed and doing voluntary labor is already out of date.”
It is true that with the development of economy, many people have become rich. However, with their wallets full, some people have changed their outlook on value, laying too much emphasis on nothing but money and personal interests. At one time, serving the people heart and soul was glorious, but now it is being constantly laughed at.
In my opinion, spiritual civilization is as important as material civilization. Nowadays, the government advocates setting up a harmonious society. If everyone does a little bit for others and the society, our world will be a much better on
改错:
I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This seems popular among students. Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies. Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.
So every coin has two sides. Our school work is already a heavy burden. Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.. We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.