记叙文写作
书信
重点诠释
英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同，它包括五部分，即：信头，称呼，正文，结束语和签名，具体如下：
精典题例解读
下面是 NMET的书面表达试题。体裁为书信，内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少，但无法照译。
考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点：
1. 认真审读所给文字和草图，确认全部信息要点。
2. 确定写的动机：向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。
3. 确定写的基本路子：以回信的口气，介绍情况，询问态度。
4. 确定语篇的结构：书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。
5. 起草语篇，考虑措辞。
6. 进行文字修改。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。
2. 参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。
Dear Bob,
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
内容要点：
1. 开头;
2. 公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）;
3. 面积、家具（25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子）;
4. 公寓位置（芳草街，离学校一站远）;
5. 月租500元;
6. 结尾。
说明：
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3. 开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。
Dear Bob,
I'm so glad to learn that you're coming in September. I've found a place for you,
It's a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuanper month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact. it's only one stop.
Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
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记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化过程为主的一种文体，是写作训练中最普遍、最基本的一种文体。记叙文要求学生根据所给情景，组织语言材料，编写成文。一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素，写作时要表达清楚。记人时，要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等；叙事时要描写事情发生和发展的过程及前因后果等。
【写作点拨】
叙事类记叙文以叙述事件为主，突出事件发生、发展和解决的过程。在写这类记叙文时要做到：
1. 重组材料，确定要点。叙事类记叙文写作前要进行立意、构思和选材等一系列过程，高考中的书面表达一般为控制性写作, 通常会提供短文的主题和写作内容, 考生要对提供的材料进行再加工, 确定写作的顺序、要点和重点, 拟定使用的句型和词组。
2. 结构完整、前后呼应。写记叙文必须有头有尾，一般来说，记叙时要把与一件事有关的六要素都交代清楚。文章的主题和内容要一致，文章的结尾与开头要呼应。
3. 人称统一、线索明确。记叙文可用“你、我、他”三种人称，但如果题目要求你使用某种人称，则必须遵循要求；叙事类记叙文一般按照事件发展的前后顺序进行叙述。
【常见问题】
1. 要点不全。要点是否齐全通常决定文章的档次。书面表达要上档次，要点齐全是关键。要点提示类书面表达一般不会出现这样的问题，看图作文则常会由于学生观察不细心等原因遗漏要点。
2. 线索不清。有些短文条理混乱，主要原因是没有确定好写作线索。叙事类文章一般按时间顺序来写。
3. 时态不明。叙事时时态混乱是学生常犯的错误之一。叙事类记叙文所记的一般是过去发生的事，原则上用过去时，有时也用现在时。
4. 主次不分。有些同学写作时平均用力，面面俱到，写出来的东西主题不突出，显得呆板乏味。
假定你在开学的第一周参加了军训，请按下面的提示用英语叙述你军训第一天的情况。
1. 当起床铃响起的时候，我还在睡梦之中。我迅速起床，穿好衣服，匆忙赶往操场。教官要求我们在五分钟内完成准备动作。
2. 教官对我们要求非常严格。一个动作要反复操练一直到他满意为止，但休息时，他和我们一起唱歌、跳舞、讲故事。我们相处得非常融洽。
3. 训练非常艰苦。太阳很毒，我全身都湿透了，但我们还得继续训练。其中还有位同学晕倒了。
4. 军训既增强了我们的体质，也磨练了我们克服困难的意志。 注意: 1. 词数: 100-150左右
2. 参考词汇: 军训 military training 教官 drillmaster
（参考答案）
Key1:
The first day of the military training
Yesterday was the first day of the military training. I was dreaming when the bell for getting up rang. The moment I heard the bell, I rose immediately, dressed quickly and then rushed to the playground. The drillmaster asked us to finish preparations within only five minutes.
The drillmaster was very strict with us. We had to drill an action again and again until he was satisfied. At break time, he joined us in singing, dancing and telling stories. We were getting along very well. The sun was so strong that my clothes were all wet. But we still went on drilling. One of my classmates fell to the ground in a faint.
The life of the military training is very hard, but I think it is meaningful. Not only does it build up our bodies, it also strengthens our determination to overcome difficulties.
图表式书面表达思路与技巧
一、 认真审题, 准确把握提示要求。
1. 审体裁。准确把握体裁是写好一篇文章关键的一步。体裁的形式直接决定着考生用英语表达信息的途径和形式, 并影响着书面表述语句的正确性和准确性。
2. 审人称。根据体裁要求, 要准确把握人称的使用。是用第一、二人称, 还是用第三人称。
3. 审时态。不同的体裁, 其动词时态的使用也各有不同。一般情况下, 故事、日记等体裁常以一般过去时为主要动词时态; 书信、便条、通知等体裁常以一般现在时为主要动词时态。 分析以上实例, 应以第一人称的口吻进行描写。从题目要求、表内要点以及体裁可知, 本文时态应以一般现在时为主体时态。
二、 理清表内要点, 进行合理发挥。
图表式书面表达其主要内容常被列在表内。考生首先必须理清表内内容要点, 抓住主要信息进行描写。可先把表内所提供的内容要点用英语列出, 尽量使用一些较高层次的词汇或短语以及所学过的句法结构(如定语从句、分词结构等) 进行描述。例如上述实例图表中的内容可用英语列出以下几个短语或句式:
(1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child"
(2) reduce the birth rate
(3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs
(4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population
(5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities
(6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work
三、 正确使用过渡性词语, 提高文章的连贯性。
过渡性词语的使用是语言的连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句子与句子之间, 段落与段落之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。例如上述实例, 我们可在要点(1)前插入表示时间顺序的过渡词语 first / firstly, 在要点(3)前插入secondly, 在要点(5)前插入fina lly 。在要点(6)前可以插入表示终结关系的过渡短语in this way / by this means。现将中学课本中应掌握的过渡词语总结如下:
1. 表示起始关系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。
2. 表示时间顺序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。
3. 表示空间顺序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。
4. 表示并列关系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither...nor, not only...but also, either...or, not...but 等。
5. 表示转折关系的有: but, yet, however, while, on the contrary 等。
6. 表示因果关系的有: because, since, as, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result (of), one reason is that...another reason is that...等。
7. 表示条件关系的有: if, unless, as (so) long as, on condition that等。
8. 表示让步关系的有: although, though, even if, in spite of, after all, in fact, what (who, when, where, how...) ever 等。
9. 表示递进关系的有:what's more, further more, besides, what's worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on the one hand...on the other hand等。
10. 表示列举事实的过渡性词语有:for example / instance, such as, take...for example, as follows, and so on等。
11. 表示总结性的有:in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole等。
12. 表示过渡性的插入语有: I think (believe, suppose, imagine, guess...), I'm afraid, you know, as is known to us all, as we all know 等。
根据以上图表式书面表达题写作思路, 上述实例可整理成文如下:
How to Reduce the Present City Population
Our modern city is crowded, and to solve the problem, three proposals are put forward. Most of the people think that we should first practice the policy of "Late marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city governments must have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs so as to lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that we should build apartment subdivisions with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around them or even build satellite towns around the cities. In this way, city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work. If these three proposals are well carried out, the population will be greatly reduced。
说明文
说明文是指说明事物的情况或道理的文章，目的介绍某一方面的知识。一般来说，高考中的说明文常涉及 : 商品介绍、旅游指南、科技读物和工作总结这几类，而形式上常以图画、图表和文字提示的形式出现。考生要根据实际情况综合运用多种说明方式，以便从不同角度、不同方面把说明对象完整地介绍出来，从而增强表达效果。同时注意运用适当过渡词来体现上下文的逻辑关系：
1．表示时间顺序的：then ，now ，soon ，afterwards ，later 等。
2．表示程序、动作过程的：first ，second ，firstly ，secondly ，first of all，next ，at first，at last等。
3．表示递进的：what’s more，once more，what is worse，in addition，besides 等。
4．表示解释和说明：namely ，for example，for instance，actually ，believe it or not，to tell you the truth，that is(to say)，according to this，for this reason等。
5．表示比较、对比的：just as，just like，more or less，sooner or later，on the contrary，on the other hand等。
6．表示总结的： finally ，in conclusion，in a word，in general，generally speaking，in short 等。
范例：假设你是一所对外汉语大学的工作人员，新学期开学时， 请你用英语写一段有关学校服务设施的文字介绍，张贴在新生宿舍门口， 方便不懂汉语的学生熟悉环境。
其中应包括以下要点：
1．商店、 邮局、银行在校园西部游泳池附近，约五分钟路程。
2．营业时间：商店——每天9∶00～22∶00。邮局——9∶00～17∶00周末休息。银行——中国银行9∶00～17∶00可兑换外币。
3．理发店在银行对面，洗衣房在宿舍楼后面一栋楼的第一层。
4．服务电话：8645336。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。
2．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．参考词汇： 兑换外币currency exchange；洗衣房 laundry
To all the new students
Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable ，here’s some information about the service available at our school.
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【思路导航】
1．文体分析：本文是说明文。
2．段落层次
(1)第一段说明学校介绍服务设施的目的，引出正文。
(2)第二段依次介绍商店、邮局和银行的位置及开放时间。
(3)第三段对可能未尽事宜提供联络咨询的方式。
【范文赏读】 Located in the west of our school，just near the swimming pool，are the shops，the post office and the bank.The shops stay open from nine in the morning till ten at night，where you can get daily necessities.The post office is open for eight hours，from nine am to five pm.And it doesn’t open during the weekends.There is a Bank of China ，which can provide you with currency
exchanges.It is open for eight hours ，beginning at nine in the morning.By the way ，there’s a barber’s just opposite the bank.If you want to go to the laundry，there is one on the ground floor of the building just behind the dormitory.
If you have any difficulty ，you may just call our
hotline,8645336.We are always ready to provide you with our good service.
表格作文
某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章，请你根据提示，用英语写一篇介绍你校和你们小组研究性学习活动的短文。
注意：
1. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
3. 词数：不少于120。
参考词汇： agricultural chemicals
Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn
in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity.
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible v ersion ：
Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs, changes of people's living conditions ，and protection of the environment.
Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown. The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell. Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories. Waste water from people's daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river. To deal with the problem, we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it.
Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities. We find such research very valuable and helpful.
假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。词数：不少于120。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible v ersion ：
Dear friends,
Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it's not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.
要点作文
学校学生会正在招募学生干部，你作为一名优秀的高中生，想竞选学生会主席，请你准备一篇不少于120词的竞选演讲稿，内容包括：
1．你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等) 可以胜任学生会主席的工作；
2．如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。
注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 学生会主席chairman of the Students' Union
Dear fellow students，
It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Students' Union. ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible v ersion ：
Dear fellow students，
It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union. Who is the best candidate? The answer is: me, nobody but me.
As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the work. Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports，I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team.
If I am elected, I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction. I will take innovative measures to make the Union a true assistance to students' study and life here as well as a bridge of communication between teachers and students. I promise that I'll become your voice, representing every need of yours.
So, my wise friends, vote for yourself and vote for me — that's because I am your hope and your best choice! Thank you!
议论文写作
重点诠释：
1． 议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实，讲道理的方式来辩明是非曲折，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点，论据和论证三部分构成。
2． 在近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。
3． 它要求语言必须简练，准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述，说明和描写等手法。
4． 写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。
5． 写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。
写作典例：
暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。
注意：1。词数120左右（不含已写好部分）
2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述；
3．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
4．参考词汇：眼界horizon(view)
范文：
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1、 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂
2、 读原著：细节更多、语言优美
3、 我的看法及理由
注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。
2、参考词汇：original work 或book in the original （原著）
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
One possible Version
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
环境资源话题作文
近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：
有人建议
你的建议
1、不浪费粮食和纸张
2、尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋
3、毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?
注意：
1、不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;
2、词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;
3、参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks
Recently ，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society ” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
健康幸福话题作文
生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执, 导致关系紧张。请你结合此事, 并根据以下提示, 用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens 冶专栏投稿。
简要描述事情的经
过
打篮球、碰撞、争执, 等等 分析发生冲突的原
因 1. 遇事不够冷静2. ……
注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
【参考范文】
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su爷s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying aharmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle
conflicts calmly andwisely.
教育校园话题作文
谈谈避免冲突的做
法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想, 提出至少两种做法)
假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用
英文作一简短的告别演讲：
1、对三年高中生活的怀念;
2、对老师的感谢;
3、对母校的祝福。
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we'll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It's really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.
To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.
It'll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we're going to begin a new journey.
Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!
高考“书面表达”考前大练兵
（1）
请根据下面提供的情景, 写一篇100词左右的短文。
Your friend Lily tells you, "I am suffering from depression (沮丧, 消沉). I have trouble sleeping. I'm often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless. I don't enjoy anything. I am never happy. I don't laugh or smile any more." You need to give her some suggestions and tell her what she should do.
（2）
最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根
（3）
下面四幅图描述了格林先生和他的孩子们在周末晚上看电视的情景。尽管他讨厌流行歌曲和乐队队员，由于孩子们喜欢，他不得不迁就。请用英语写一篇短文说明两代人对电视节目的不同喜好。
注意：
1．短文须包括所有图画的内容，根据行文要求可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺。
2． 词数100左右。
（图1中书上文字：Top of the Pops最新走红流行歌曲；图2中电视上文字：the Gorgons一演唱组名）
（4）
仔细观察下面图画，请你给China Daily 写一篇100字左右的短文，描述一下你在路上所见的事，并就骑车人--李平的行为，简单阐明自己的感想。
（5）
充分发挥你的想象力，写一篇100词左右的文章。题目为My Dream House。内容包括以下几点：
1． 房子由什么建成；
2． 有什么优点（如：不怕水火、保温隔热、随处移动等）；
3． 家具，能源。
（6）
你的家乡是一个依山傍水的小镇。过去，这里人们生活极其贫困。解放以后，人们生活的各个方面都发生了很大变化。请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇120
参考答案：
第一篇：
One possible version:
Lily, don't be upset. I have some pieces of advice for you. First of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs, because music has been proved to have great effect on smoothing pressure. If you still feel depressed, look at yourself in a mirror and smile for no less than 30 seconds, then you will believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood. Of course, you had better try to find any good friend you can trust to talk to. I do hope these will help you. Please believe tomorrow will be better and our life will be full of sunshine!
第二篇：
One possible version:
Dear Mr Edward,
Recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. Their opinions mainly fall into two groups. Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. In addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.
第三篇：
One possible version：
Mr. Green and his children usually spend some time watching TV in the evening. But they don't like the same TV program. His children like pop music very much, but Mr. Green hates it .
One evening at the weekend, the children wanted to watch Top of the Pops. They told their father it was performed by the Gorgons, a new group. Mr. Green had to give in. The children enjoyed the program very much while Mr. Green thought that the music sounded terrible and the group all looked like wild men. He didn't listen to them.
第四篇：
One Possible Version
One day Li Ping was riding fast when she suddenly saw an old woman before her. But it was too late to stop immediately. The old woman was knocked down. Li Pin didn't help her. Instead, she scolded her and rode away.
When Li Ping stopped her bicycle, she was surprised to find her new shoes missing. She hurried back and found the old woman there holding her shoes in her hands. She was sorry for what she had done and apologized to the woman.
From this, I learned everybody should be kind to each other. Never do as Li Pin did to the old, or you will feel greatly sorry.
第五篇：
One Possible Version
My Dream House
My dream house is made of a kind of special paper, which can't be easily destroyed by floods or fires. When floods hit our area, it can float on the surface of the water. And all the doors will be closed at once. The furniture in the house is also made of special materials, which can't be broken, either.
Our house can keep us warm in winter and cool in summer. We use solar energy instead of traditional fuels, so our house is environmentally friendly. Made of paper, it is so light that it can move to anywhere you like, what's more, it has wheels and wings.
Such is my dream house.
第六篇：
One Possible Version
My hometown is a small town. It has a population of more than 200 thousand people and an area of 36 square kilometers. It is at the foot of a mountain. In front of the town lies a big river.
Before liberation, people there lived a hard life. Great changes have taken place there since liberation. They have built many factories, shops, hospitals and schools.
The school education has also improved. Before liberation there was only one school. Only the rich children could go to school. Now there are 10 schools. Every child can go to school.
People's lives are colorful. After work they go
shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports. They all live a happy life.
记叙文写作
书信
重点诠释
英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同，它包括五部分，即：信头，称呼，正文，结束语和签名，具体如下：
精典题例解读
下面是 NMET的书面表达试题。体裁为书信，内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少，但无法照译。
考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点：
1. 认真审读所给文字和草图，确认全部信息要点。
2. 确定写的动机：向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。
3. 确定写的基本路子：以回信的口气，介绍情况，询问态度。
4. 确定语篇的结构：书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。
5. 起草语篇，考虑措辞。
6. 进行文字修改。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。
2. 参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。
Dear Bob,
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
内容要点：
1. 开头;
2. 公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）;
3. 面积、家具（25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子）;
4. 公寓位置（芳草街，离学校一站远）;
5. 月租500元;
6. 结尾。
说明：
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3. 开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。
Dear Bob,
I'm so glad to learn that you're coming in September. I've found a place for you,
It's a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuanper month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact. it's only one stop.
Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
**********************************************************结束
记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化过程为主的一种文体，是写作训练中最普遍、最基本的一种文体。记叙文要求学生根据所给情景，组织语言材料，编写成文。一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素，写作时要表达清楚。记人时，要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等；叙事时要描写事情发生和发展的过程及前因后果等。
【写作点拨】
叙事类记叙文以叙述事件为主，突出事件发生、发展和解决的过程。在写这类记叙文时要做到：
1. 重组材料，确定要点。叙事类记叙文写作前要进行立意、构思和选材等一系列过程，高考中的书面表达一般为控制性写作, 通常会提供短文的主题和写作内容, 考生要对提供的材料进行再加工, 确定写作的顺序、要点和重点, 拟定使用的句型和词组。
2. 结构完整、前后呼应。写记叙文必须有头有尾，一般来说，记叙时要把与一件事有关的六要素都交代清楚。文章的主题和内容要一致，文章的结尾与开头要呼应。
3. 人称统一、线索明确。记叙文可用“你、我、他”三种人称，但如果题目要求你使用某种人称，则必须遵循要求；叙事类记叙文一般按照事件发展的前后顺序进行叙述。
【常见问题】
1. 要点不全。要点是否齐全通常决定文章的档次。书面表达要上档次，要点齐全是关键。要点提示类书面表达一般不会出现这样的问题，看图作文则常会由于学生观察不细心等原因遗漏要点。
2. 线索不清。有些短文条理混乱，主要原因是没有确定好写作线索。叙事类文章一般按时间顺序来写。
3. 时态不明。叙事时时态混乱是学生常犯的错误之一。叙事类记叙文所记的一般是过去发生的事，原则上用过去时，有时也用现在时。
4. 主次不分。有些同学写作时平均用力，面面俱到，写出来的东西主题不突出，显得呆板乏味。
假定你在开学的第一周参加了军训，请按下面的提示用英语叙述你军训第一天的情况。
1. 当起床铃响起的时候，我还在睡梦之中。我迅速起床，穿好衣服，匆忙赶往操场。教官要求我们在五分钟内完成准备动作。
2. 教官对我们要求非常严格。一个动作要反复操练一直到他满意为止，但休息时，他和我们一起唱歌、跳舞、讲故事。我们相处得非常融洽。
3. 训练非常艰苦。太阳很毒，我全身都湿透了，但我们还得继续训练。其中还有位同学晕倒了。
4. 军训既增强了我们的体质，也磨练了我们克服困难的意志。 注意: 1. 词数: 100-150左右
2. 参考词汇: 军训 military training 教官 drillmaster
（参考答案）
Key1:
The first day of the military training
Yesterday was the first day of the military training. I was dreaming when the bell for getting up rang. The moment I heard the bell, I rose immediately, dressed quickly and then rushed to the playground. The drillmaster asked us to finish preparations within only five minutes.
The drillmaster was very strict with us. We had to drill an action again and again until he was satisfied. At break time, he joined us in singing, dancing and telling stories. We were getting along very well. The sun was so strong that my clothes were all wet. But we still went on drilling. One of my classmates fell to the ground in a faint.
The life of the military training is very hard, but I think it is meaningful. Not only does it build up our bodies, it also strengthens our determination to overcome difficulties.
图表式书面表达思路与技巧
一、 认真审题, 准确把握提示要求。
1. 审体裁。准确把握体裁是写好一篇文章关键的一步。体裁的形式直接决定着考生用英语表达信息的途径和形式, 并影响着书面表述语句的正确性和准确性。
2. 审人称。根据体裁要求, 要准确把握人称的使用。是用第一、二人称, 还是用第三人称。
3. 审时态。不同的体裁, 其动词时态的使用也各有不同。一般情况下, 故事、日记等体裁常以一般过去时为主要动词时态; 书信、便条、通知等体裁常以一般现在时为主要动词时态。 分析以上实例, 应以第一人称的口吻进行描写。从题目要求、表内要点以及体裁可知, 本文时态应以一般现在时为主体时态。
二、 理清表内要点, 进行合理发挥。
图表式书面表达其主要内容常被列在表内。考生首先必须理清表内内容要点, 抓住主要信息进行描写。可先把表内所提供的内容要点用英语列出, 尽量使用一些较高层次的词汇或短语以及所学过的句法结构(如定语从句、分词结构等) 进行描述。例如上述实例图表中的内容可用英语列出以下几个短语或句式:
(1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child"
(2) reduce the birth rate
(3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs
(4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population
(5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities
(6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work
三、 正确使用过渡性词语, 提高文章的连贯性。
过渡性词语的使用是语言的连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句子与句子之间, 段落与段落之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。例如上述实例, 我们可在要点(1)前插入表示时间顺序的过渡词语 first / firstly, 在要点(3)前插入secondly, 在要点(5)前插入fina lly 。在要点(6)前可以插入表示终结关系的过渡短语in this way / by this means。现将中学课本中应掌握的过渡词语总结如下:
1. 表示起始关系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。
2. 表示时间顺序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。
3. 表示空间顺序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。
4. 表示并列关系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither...nor, not only...but also, either...or, not...but 等。
5. 表示转折关系的有: but, yet, however, while, on the contrary 等。
6. 表示因果关系的有: because, since, as, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result (of), one reason is that...another reason is that...等。
7. 表示条件关系的有: if, unless, as (so) long as, on condition that等。
8. 表示让步关系的有: although, though, even if, in spite of, after all, in fact, what (who, when, where, how...) ever 等。
9. 表示递进关系的有:what's more, further more, besides, what's worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on the one hand...on the other hand等。
10. 表示列举事实的过渡性词语有:for example / instance, such as, take...for example, as follows, and so on等。
11. 表示总结性的有:in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole等。
12. 表示过渡性的插入语有: I think (believe, suppose, imagine, guess...), I'm afraid, you know, as is known to us all, as we all know 等。
根据以上图表式书面表达题写作思路, 上述实例可整理成文如下:
How to Reduce the Present City Population
Our modern city is crowded, and to solve the problem, three proposals are put forward. Most of the people think that we should first practice the policy of "Late marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city governments must have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs so as to lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that we should build apartment subdivisions with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around them or even build satellite towns around the cities. In this way, city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work. If these three proposals are well carried out, the population will be greatly reduced。
说明文
说明文是指说明事物的情况或道理的文章，目的介绍某一方面的知识。一般来说，高考中的说明文常涉及 : 商品介绍、旅游指南、科技读物和工作总结这几类，而形式上常以图画、图表和文字提示的形式出现。考生要根据实际情况综合运用多种说明方式，以便从不同角度、不同方面把说明对象完整地介绍出来，从而增强表达效果。同时注意运用适当过渡词来体现上下文的逻辑关系：
1．表示时间顺序的：then ，now ，soon ，afterwards ，later 等。
2．表示程序、动作过程的：first ，second ，firstly ，secondly ，first of all，next ，at first，at last等。
3．表示递进的：what’s more，once more，what is worse，in addition，besides 等。
4．表示解释和说明：namely ，for example，for instance，actually ，believe it or not，to tell you the truth，that is(to say)，according to this，for this reason等。
5．表示比较、对比的：just as，just like，more or less，sooner or later，on the contrary，on the other hand等。
6．表示总结的： finally ，in conclusion，in a word，in general，generally speaking，in short 等。
范例：假设你是一所对外汉语大学的工作人员，新学期开学时， 请你用英语写一段有关学校服务设施的文字介绍，张贴在新生宿舍门口， 方便不懂汉语的学生熟悉环境。
其中应包括以下要点：
1．商店、 邮局、银行在校园西部游泳池附近，约五分钟路程。
2．营业时间：商店——每天9∶00～22∶00。邮局——9∶00～17∶00周末休息。银行——中国银行9∶00～17∶00可兑换外币。
3．理发店在银行对面，洗衣房在宿舍楼后面一栋楼的第一层。
4．服务电话：8645336。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。
2．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．参考词汇： 兑换外币currency exchange；洗衣房 laundry
To all the new students
Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable ，here’s some information about the service available at our school.
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【思路导航】
1．文体分析：本文是说明文。
2．段落层次
(1)第一段说明学校介绍服务设施的目的，引出正文。
(2)第二段依次介绍商店、邮局和银行的位置及开放时间。
(3)第三段对可能未尽事宜提供联络咨询的方式。
【范文赏读】 Located in the west of our school，just near the swimming pool，are the shops，the post office and the bank.The shops stay open from nine in the morning till ten at night，where you can get daily necessities.The post office is open for eight hours，from nine am to five pm.And it doesn’t open during the weekends.There is a Bank of China ，which can provide you with currency
exchanges.It is open for eight hours ，beginning at nine in the morning.By the way ，there’s a barber’s just opposite the bank.If you want to go to the laundry，there is one on the ground floor of the building just behind the dormitory.
If you have any difficulty ，you may just call our
hotline,8645336.We are always ready to provide you with our good service.
表格作文
某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章，请你根据提示，用英语写一篇介绍你校和你们小组研究性学习活动的短文。
注意：
1. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
3. 词数：不少于120。
参考词汇： agricultural chemicals
Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn
in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity.
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【参考范文】One possible v ersion ：
Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs, changes of people's living conditions ，and protection of the environment.
Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown. The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell. Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories. Waste water from people's daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river. To deal with the problem, we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it.
Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities. We find such research very valuable and helpful.
假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。词数：不少于120。
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【参考范文】One possible v ersion ：
Dear friends,
Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it's not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.
要点作文
学校学生会正在招募学生干部，你作为一名优秀的高中生，想竞选学生会主席，请你准备一篇不少于120词的竞选演讲稿，内容包括：
1．你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等) 可以胜任学生会主席的工作；
2．如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。
注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 学生会主席chairman of the Students' Union
Dear fellow students，
It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Students' Union. ________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible v ersion ：
Dear fellow students，
It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union. Who is the best candidate? The answer is: me, nobody but me.
As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the work. Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports，I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team.
If I am elected, I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction. I will take innovative measures to make the Union a true assistance to students' study and life here as well as a bridge of communication between teachers and students. I promise that I'll become your voice, representing every need of yours.
So, my wise friends, vote for yourself and vote for me — that's because I am your hope and your best choice! Thank you!
议论文写作
重点诠释：
1． 议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实，讲道理的方式来辩明是非曲折，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点，论据和论证三部分构成。
2． 在近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。
3． 它要求语言必须简练，准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述，说明和描写等手法。
4． 写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。
5． 写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。
写作典例：
暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。
注意：1。词数120左右（不含已写好部分）
2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述；
3．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
4．参考词汇：眼界horizon(view)
范文：
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1、 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂
2、 读原著：细节更多、语言优美
3、 我的看法及理由
注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。
2、参考词汇：original work 或book in the original （原著）
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
One possible Version
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
环境资源话题作文
近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：
有人建议
你的建议
1、不浪费粮食和纸张
2、尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋
3、毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?
注意：
1、不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;
2、词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;
3、参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks
Recently ，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society ” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
健康幸福话题作文
生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执, 导致关系紧张。请你结合此事, 并根据以下提示, 用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens 冶专栏投稿。
简要描述事情的经
过
打篮球、碰撞、争执, 等等 分析发生冲突的原
因 1. 遇事不够冷静2. ……
注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
【参考范文】
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su爷s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying aharmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle
conflicts calmly andwisely.
教育校园话题作文
谈谈避免冲突的做
法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想, 提出至少两种做法)
假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用
英文作一简短的告别演讲：
1、对三年高中生活的怀念;
2、对老师的感谢;
3、对母校的祝福。
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we'll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It's really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.
To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.
It'll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we're going to begin a new journey.
Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!
高考“书面表达”考前大练兵
（1）
请根据下面提供的情景, 写一篇100词左右的短文。
Your friend Lily tells you, "I am suffering from depression (沮丧, 消沉). I have trouble sleeping. I'm often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless. I don't enjoy anything. I am never happy. I don't laugh or smile any more." You need to give her some suggestions and tell her what she should do.
（2）
最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根
（3）
下面四幅图描述了格林先生和他的孩子们在周末晚上看电视的情景。尽管他讨厌流行歌曲和乐队队员，由于孩子们喜欢，他不得不迁就。请用英语写一篇短文说明两代人对电视节目的不同喜好。
注意：
1．短文须包括所有图画的内容，根据行文要求可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺。
2． 词数100左右。
（图1中书上文字：Top of the Pops最新走红流行歌曲；图2中电视上文字：the Gorgons一演唱组名）
（4）
仔细观察下面图画，请你给China Daily 写一篇100字左右的短文，描述一下你在路上所见的事，并就骑车人--李平的行为，简单阐明自己的感想。
（5）
充分发挥你的想象力，写一篇100词左右的文章。题目为My Dream House。内容包括以下几点：
1． 房子由什么建成；
2． 有什么优点（如：不怕水火、保温隔热、随处移动等）；
3． 家具，能源。
（6）
你的家乡是一个依山傍水的小镇。过去，这里人们生活极其贫困。解放以后，人们生活的各个方面都发生了很大变化。请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇120
参考答案：
第一篇：
One possible version:
Lily, don't be upset. I have some pieces of advice for you. First of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs, because music has been proved to have great effect on smoothing pressure. If you still feel depressed, look at yourself in a mirror and smile for no less than 30 seconds, then you will believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood. Of course, you had better try to find any good friend you can trust to talk to. I do hope these will help you. Please believe tomorrow will be better and our life will be full of sunshine!
第二篇：
One possible version:
Dear Mr Edward,
Recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. Their opinions mainly fall into two groups. Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. In addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.
第三篇：
One possible version：
Mr. Green and his children usually spend some time watching TV in the evening. But they don't like the same TV program. His children like pop music very much, but Mr. Green hates it .
One evening at the weekend, the children wanted to watch Top of the Pops. They told their father it was performed by the Gorgons, a new group. Mr. Green had to give in. The children enjoyed the program very much while Mr. Green thought that the music sounded terrible and the group all looked like wild men. He didn't listen to them.
第四篇：
One Possible Version
One day Li Ping was riding fast when she suddenly saw an old woman before her. But it was too late to stop immediately. The old woman was knocked down. Li Pin didn't help her. Instead, she scolded her and rode away.
When Li Ping stopped her bicycle, she was surprised to find her new shoes missing. She hurried back and found the old woman there holding her shoes in her hands. She was sorry for what she had done and apologized to the woman.
From this, I learned everybody should be kind to each other. Never do as Li Pin did to the old, or you will feel greatly sorry.
第五篇：
One Possible Version
My Dream House
My dream house is made of a kind of special paper, which can't be easily destroyed by floods or fires. When floods hit our area, it can float on the surface of the water. And all the doors will be closed at once. The furniture in the house is also made of special materials, which can't be broken, either.
Our house can keep us warm in winter and cool in summer. We use solar energy instead of traditional fuels, so our house is environmentally friendly. Made of paper, it is so light that it can move to anywhere you like, what's more, it has wheels and wings.
Such is my dream house.
第六篇：
One Possible Version
My hometown is a small town. It has a population of more than 200 thousand people and an area of 36 square kilometers. It is at the foot of a mountain. In front of the town lies a big river.
Before liberation, people there lived a hard life. Great changes have taken place there since liberation. They have built many factories, shops, hospitals and schools.
The school education has also improved. Before liberation there was only one school. Only the rich children could go to school. Now there are 10 schools. Every child can go to school.
People's lives are colorful. After work they go
shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports. They all live a happy life.